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nadia g's avatar

β€œfor i am a body of water

held by bodies of water”

I love love love this 🌊🌊

jennae's avatar

thank you so much my wonderful friend 🐚🩡✨

Hannah's avatar

Such a beautiful Pisces you are my dear friend xx

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Thank you my beautiful Hannah!! 🩡

Belinda Drakes's avatar

This drift of words feels like a wave that didn’t just roll in, it pulled me under. I felt the ocean not as horizon but as pulse in my chest, a thousand little tides inside me stirring toward upheaval and peace at once. You didn’t just write about water, you reminded me I am water, held and shaped by every current and crest I’ve ever loved or feared, every shore I’ve stumbled onto at dusk. The poem reads like salt on skin, like the ocean whispering back its own name through your voice, and I come away feeling washed, wild and greeting the horizon on my own terms

jennae's avatar

Thank you so much Belinda!! This is beautiful 🩡✨

Yvonne's avatar

So beautiful! Thank you for sharing! ❀

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Thank you so much for reading Yvonne! 🐚✨

Melissa's avatar

Oh I love this piece of writing πŸ₯²

β€œi want to feel all of it

the clouds that spill from my wrists

the storms behind my eyes

the touch of the river around my waist”

jennae's avatar

Thank you so very much lovely Melissa!! So glad you loved it πŸ₯²πŸšβœ¨

Rebecca Cooley's avatar

Beautiful and profound! Such keen observations and descriptions! Brava! πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

jennae's avatar

Thank you so much beautiful Rebecca 🌸✨