What I love about your writing is how much your words challenge me lol I have to access parts of my brain that are now mostly focused on raising a child lol and integrate this new information / new vocabulary and I love it. I love how I have to take a step back, read it a couple of times, listen to your voice and then gain a whole other meaning from it. The sensuality, connection, amorous love is there but I'm so interested in how you form these strings of words -- honeycomb licks, mist of lunar compassion, thalassic eyes... I can go on and on... how you build these worlds, they exist in other galaxies. Your poetry is simply otherwordly Jennae ✨🐝🌌
Aw Joscelyne this is such a sweet message to receive. I so deeply appreciate the time and care you take to sink into my poetry and unravel the many layers. It’s a poet’s dream to have readers like you that truly sit with the words and turn them over in their hands. Thank you so much for reading and for these beautiful words!! ✨✨✨
wow I'm so impressed that you can write sonnets!! And a beautiful one at that.
This is the second time I've seen a post with Sirens in it today, and I am working on a chapter about Sirens for my pirate novel. the universe is conspiring . . .
Aww thank you so much Elizabeth!! I love the synchronicities with sirens that keep showing up for you. The universe is definitely encouraging you forward with your novel! Thank you for reading!! 🧜🏼♀️🧜🏼♀️
This poem is an intoxicating dance of language and imagery, weaving together the tactile and the ethereal. The use of sensory metaphors - scent, taste, texture - creates a vivid world full of richness and desire. Each line feels like a step deeper into a dreamlike state where femininity is both powerful and delicate. The recurring motifs of nature, such as honeycombs and flowers, suggest an elemental connection to the world, while the choice of luxurious, almost mystical imagery - pearls, geranium kisses, lunar compassion - elevates the speaker to a divine, almost otherworldly level of seduction. The writing itself, lush and elaborate, mirrors the intoxicating effect of the images it conjures, drawing the reader into a sensual experience. It speaks not only to physical attraction but also to the allure of the divine, the untouchable. It's a fascinating exploration of how language can serve as both a tool of seduction and self-expression, leaving a lasting, hypnotic impression. I just loved it, Jennae! The way the poem blends beauty and desire is mesmerizing. It's like a dance between elegance and intoxication that leaves an unforgettable impression.
Wow thank you so much Ana for this beautiful and thoughtful feedback!! It means so much to me. Thank you for these deep reflections, I appreciate you so much!! 💜
You're very welcome! It's truly a pleasure to engage with your work, Jennae - it's so inspiring and thought-provoking. I appreciate you as well, and I'm looking forward to continuing this exchange of ideas.
I feel the same way! It's such a joy to connect through poetry and share this creative journey together. I'm truly grateful for this exchange of thoughts and inspiration!
Wow, this is so lush and evocative, it feels like stepping into a dreamscape of sensuality and nature, your expertise!! I love all the imagery, like “honeycomb licks” and “flowers on my tongue” 😭😭 It’s both tender and powerful, and I especially adore the siren-like finish💗 can’t wait for what’s to come✨
Thank you so much 😭😭 Your words mean so much to me! i’m so glad you are enjoying this series my friend. “a dreamscape of sensuality and nature” 🥲 Thank you for always being her with such thoughtful and poetic support 💜
What I love about your writing is how much your words challenge me lol I have to access parts of my brain that are now mostly focused on raising a child lol and integrate this new information / new vocabulary and I love it. I love how I have to take a step back, read it a couple of times, listen to your voice and then gain a whole other meaning from it. The sensuality, connection, amorous love is there but I'm so interested in how you form these strings of words -- honeycomb licks, mist of lunar compassion, thalassic eyes... I can go on and on... how you build these worlds, they exist in other galaxies. Your poetry is simply otherwordly Jennae ✨🐝🌌
Aw Joscelyne this is such a sweet message to receive. I so deeply appreciate the time and care you take to sink into my poetry and unravel the many layers. It’s a poet’s dream to have readers like you that truly sit with the words and turn them over in their hands. Thank you so much for reading and for these beautiful words!! ✨✨✨
wow I'm so impressed that you can write sonnets!! And a beautiful one at that.
This is the second time I've seen a post with Sirens in it today, and I am working on a chapter about Sirens for my pirate novel. the universe is conspiring . . .
Aww thank you so much Elizabeth!! I love the synchronicities with sirens that keep showing up for you. The universe is definitely encouraging you forward with your novel! Thank you for reading!! 🧜🏼♀️🧜🏼♀️
amazing as always
thank you so much for always reading!!
You sweet sweet siren, you. An absolute delight to be enrobed in your perfume
Thank you so much vibrant faye!! Such a pleasure to have our senses intertwine through poetry 💜
SO SEXY!!
hehe thank you!!
This poem is an intoxicating dance of language and imagery, weaving together the tactile and the ethereal. The use of sensory metaphors - scent, taste, texture - creates a vivid world full of richness and desire. Each line feels like a step deeper into a dreamlike state where femininity is both powerful and delicate. The recurring motifs of nature, such as honeycombs and flowers, suggest an elemental connection to the world, while the choice of luxurious, almost mystical imagery - pearls, geranium kisses, lunar compassion - elevates the speaker to a divine, almost otherworldly level of seduction. The writing itself, lush and elaborate, mirrors the intoxicating effect of the images it conjures, drawing the reader into a sensual experience. It speaks not only to physical attraction but also to the allure of the divine, the untouchable. It's a fascinating exploration of how language can serve as both a tool of seduction and self-expression, leaving a lasting, hypnotic impression. I just loved it, Jennae! The way the poem blends beauty and desire is mesmerizing. It's like a dance between elegance and intoxication that leaves an unforgettable impression.
Wow thank you so much Ana for this beautiful and thoughtful feedback!! It means so much to me. Thank you for these deep reflections, I appreciate you so much!! 💜
You're very welcome! It's truly a pleasure to engage with your work, Jennae - it's so inspiring and thought-provoking. I appreciate you as well, and I'm looking forward to continuing this exchange of ideas.
I’m so glad to have connected with you and to be able to share our poetry with each other!
I feel the same way! It's such a joy to connect through poetry and share this creative journey together. I'm truly grateful for this exchange of thoughts and inspiration!
Me too 🥹🥹
Ohh wow this is tender and gorgeous. What a verbal spell. I’m enchanted.
Thank you so much for reading! I love “a verbal spell” thank you for your kind comment!
Wow, this is so lush and evocative, it feels like stepping into a dreamscape of sensuality and nature, your expertise!! I love all the imagery, like “honeycomb licks” and “flowers on my tongue” 😭😭 It’s both tender and powerful, and I especially adore the siren-like finish💗 can’t wait for what’s to come✨
Thank you so much 😭😭 Your words mean so much to me! i’m so glad you are enjoying this series my friend. “a dreamscape of sensuality and nature” 🥲 Thank you for always being her with such thoughtful and poetic support 💜
So delightful and delicious. ✨Excellent poem! 💛
„I need warmth for my sweetness to bloom.“ Can’t wait for the next part!
🙈 Thank you so much my dear wildflower!! Thank you for reading 🪻
🤍🤍🤍
Sensual, magical 🤍✨
Thank you for reading Grace!! ✨✨
A sensuous, dreamy way to start my day.... So much can happen in a single sonnet. This one is a delicious addition, Jennae.
Best Wishes - Dave
Ahh this makes me so happy to hear David. Thank you so much for reading!
How divine!! I am loving this series! It’s dreamy and warm 🤍🤍
Thank you so much for reading lovely Hannah!! I’m so glad you’re enjoying it. I’m so grateful for your support 🥲