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Wow! This might be one of my favorite poems you’ve ever written! It felt so passionate and full of raw, natural love, “deep throat daydream”🍯

Soft and fierce at the same time❤️‍🔥

I cannot wait for part two ✨

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Oh my gosh really?? 🙈 Yay!! ☁️ Thank you so much my sweet friend 🪽

Passion and raw, natural love are such accurate descriptions of the emotion behind this piece 🤍

Thank you for reading and I can’t wait for you to read part two as well… it’s quite different!! ❤️‍🔥

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Aug 9·edited Aug 9Liked by jennae

I have melted. You turned me into liquid, then vapor, and now my being is a scent in the air. I no longer exist, I am now a feather touching the skin, invisible. When can I buy your book? You are a genius. I'd like to keep reading your work now that you've transported me to paradise

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Forrest, your comments are always so poetic and lift me up to the clouds with encouragement ☁️ I would love to publish a book one day! Thank you so much for reading! 🪽

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This is so gorgeous and I feel like I have unfurled ever more layers of appreciation for it after reading it again following Troublemaker. My favourite lines are “There are two oceans looking up at you. All my words swim there” and “my clouds are not something you can ever take. They were a gift from the sea” – I just feel that these words hold so much. What a gift to be able to receive these two poems side by side <3

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Thank you Suyin 🪽✨ Receiving the lines that resonant with you is my favourite thing to hear. Thank you so much for holding my poetry with such tenderness and care. Everything you touch feels so much more precious afterwards.

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Jennae, what a gorgeous message to receive!! <3 <3 I feel the same when my words are held by your heart. Thank you so, so much :’)

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Thank you Suyin 🥲🥲

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This is the most stunning duality energy <3

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You are the most stunning energy! hehe Thank you so much 🪽✨

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I’m having the best Saturday reading so many amazing writers on Substack. And then I stumbled upon you (thanks to Forrest’s restack). And just wow!!! I’m on another level of high. The way you craft your words together, say so much without saying much at all, ooze with beautiful, luscious energy that touches the hearts of all your listeners…it was truly a blissful and loving experience. Will definitely check out more of your work and meditations!❤️

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Ahh Nida!! Thank you so much for being here! Isn’t substack wonderful? How you can discover different voices from all around the world, I love it! ☁️

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your feedback made my day and is received with so much love and gratitude 🤍 I’m so glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy any of my other poems and meditations that interest you ☺️

I’m also going to have a read of your pieces of writing 🪽✨

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i want to feel what this poem gives, so beautiful, sensual, and raw ❤️‍🔥 thank you for sharing!💓

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thank you so much for reading laur! this is such a lovely comment 🪽✨🤍☁️

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I have been captured and enraptured beyond all words—Beautiful!

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Thank you so much Paul! 🪽✨

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Thank you, Jennae!

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So that’s what it feels like! 💭😮🔥 well done!

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Thank you so much for reading!! 🪽✨

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Oh my, this is incredible. Beautiful.

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Thank you so much Mike!!

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What a stunning piece, I am awestruck ✨

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Aww thank you so much Jenna!’ 🪽✨ I appreciate you being here so much 🤍☁️

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sultry, sensual, Venus rising from seafoam a la Boticelli, the dark crimson wings of Howl in Howl's Moving Castle..."My kisses are splitting skin, there’s feathers between my teeth." 🐦‍⬛🪽💋🐚

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Ahh I adore this comment!! The best!! Thank you so much Joscelyne for reading!! 🪞☁️🪽

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I read it with your voice in the background and it was so beautiful and poetic to follow along, really like a daydream on a cloudy day ☁️☁️☁️☁️✨✨✨✨✨magic.

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Awww thank you so much!! I love that it felt like a daydream ☁️☁️ I so appreciate your beautiful feedback 🪽

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Oooh this is so so sexy!!! 💦💦💦💦

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Thank you for reading Shivani!

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this is so beautiful Jennae!! I absolutely loved listening to the recording too, I felt my entire body soften as the words and music washed over me. I feel like I could listen to you speak all day!! so sensual 🥀

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Thank you soooo much Aaliyah!! This is so beautiful to hear, I love that the words and music provided some sensual softness. Thank you for reading 🪽🤍

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Thank you for reading.

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