Idk why but I got Scorpio vibes from this piece! Maybe it's the October eclipse but these 2 lines: Curling dust upward, Saturn turning. Cursing lunar plumes.
Love how you're pushing the boundaries of your creativity and the way you play with language. This line though: i’m so sorry my love, i didn’t mean to cut off your head, i just needed something for dinner to serve, because you told me i’m here to serve men. SO GOOD! Reminds me of the Artemisia Gentileschi's painting, Judith slaying Holofernes.
Hehe I love this comment, thank you so much Joscelyne! You always have the most wonderful feedback. I can feel the Scorpio energy too, I have a lot of placements in the 8th house so maybe that’s why haha.
Thank you so much, it’s really fun to play with language in a new way, I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
Haha I love that line too! Oooh I just looked up the painting and definitely!! Thank you for always being here with your artistic insights ❤️🌹
Jennae, this is so stunning and I feel both the power and reclamation in your words! Absolutely love the Aries x Scorpio x 8H vibes in your words and the pictures, and of course, one of our favourite quotes from Sylvia Plath! “oh darling, i’d certainly be a weed. Because it sounds like so much fun, to be a nuisance in a garden that tells you you’re not good enough.” This is everything! I want to put it on a t-shirt and let it be one of my life’s guiding principles
🙈Thank you!!! I heard someone yesterday say “when they go low, i go to hell” and I laughed thinking “that’s my troublemaker poem!! 😂” It was so empowering to write. I love the idea of grabbing the labels others try to stick on us and twirling them around our finger with a smile before placing them on our head as a crown.
I love that this is receiving a lot of reflections about Scorpio and the 8th house as well as Aries. It makes me want to explore these aspects of my chart further.
I definitely had to include the Sylvia Plath quote!! It just felt so right.
Oh my gosh!! We definitely need this on a t-shirt 💯
Thank you so much for reading and reflecting!! I appreciate you so much and it’s such a joy to have your words return ❤️🔥❤️🔥
That’s such an amazing capture of the essence of your poem!! Love it! And yes, there’s always a time when the Scorpio and 8H aspects of our chart start calling to us to look under those layers we haven’t looked at before. I always felt the fire element in your chart would be an important spark that moves the air and water placements into their next level expression. So much to explore here. And thank you my dear friend, I’m so happy to be back here sharing my responses to your beautiful words too <3 <3 <3
Aww thank you Leon! That means a lot to me and I receive your feedback so warmly. It definitely pushed me outside my comfort zone and was so much fun to write and cathartic too. Thank you for being here 🔥
Wow the fire and power in every word, and also the sensuality beneath it all. I feel turned on and rebellious and like a lusty dark goddess all at the same time reading this 🔥
Ahh thank you so much for reading Aaliyah!! 🔥🔥I love all these words and feelings! So glad it felt that way to read it! So powerful to be a little bit of a dark lusty rebel every now and then haha Thank you for this comment ❤️🌹
I'm quite sure that you are, haha. On the other hand, all desire is for a little mystery. If we knew exactly what we were chasing after, it wouldn't be worth getting. We like to be surprised. And we surprise ourselves. Herein lies the fun of poetry, and you dished out alluring shock in spades. Loved all the assonance and rhythm too. And your reading!
Absolutely, this is so true! Playing with poetry is so much fun. It was such a joyful and empowering experience to tell this story through the two poems.
Thank you so much!! I love experimenting with sound and rhythm. Thank you for being here and for your feedback!
Idk why but I got Scorpio vibes from this piece! Maybe it's the October eclipse but these 2 lines: Curling dust upward, Saturn turning. Cursing lunar plumes.
Love how you're pushing the boundaries of your creativity and the way you play with language. This line though: i’m so sorry my love, i didn’t mean to cut off your head, i just needed something for dinner to serve, because you told me i’m here to serve men. SO GOOD! Reminds me of the Artemisia Gentileschi's painting, Judith slaying Holofernes.
Hehe I love this comment, thank you so much Joscelyne! You always have the most wonderful feedback. I can feel the Scorpio energy too, I have a lot of placements in the 8th house so maybe that’s why haha.
Thank you so much, it’s really fun to play with language in a new way, I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
Haha I love that line too! Oooh I just looked up the painting and definitely!! Thank you for always being here with your artistic insights ❤️🌹
soft red rose dipped in opium <3 this poem is just everything
i adore that description 😍 thank you so much for being the first one to read it and giving me the courage to post it 🌹🌹
Girl, this is astounding.
I absolutely love it, I can feel power rising and I am so here for it ✨️
Absolutely flawless, this blew me away ❤️
eeee thank you!! i was so nervous to post it. it felt so empowering to write and record this haha. thank you so much my beautiful friend!! ❤️
Oh it felt empowering to READ girl. The power in this is incredible. Omg and I get to be friends with the genius that wrote this?! ✨️blessed✨️
I’m so glad it felt that way to read. Aww, I’m blessed to have you as a friend who supports me through everything. Love you ❤️
Jennae, this is so stunning and I feel both the power and reclamation in your words! Absolutely love the Aries x Scorpio x 8H vibes in your words and the pictures, and of course, one of our favourite quotes from Sylvia Plath! “oh darling, i’d certainly be a weed. Because it sounds like so much fun, to be a nuisance in a garden that tells you you’re not good enough.” This is everything! I want to put it on a t-shirt and let it be one of my life’s guiding principles
🙈Thank you!!! I heard someone yesterday say “when they go low, i go to hell” and I laughed thinking “that’s my troublemaker poem!! 😂” It was so empowering to write. I love the idea of grabbing the labels others try to stick on us and twirling them around our finger with a smile before placing them on our head as a crown.
I love that this is receiving a lot of reflections about Scorpio and the 8th house as well as Aries. It makes me want to explore these aspects of my chart further.
I definitely had to include the Sylvia Plath quote!! It just felt so right.
Oh my gosh!! We definitely need this on a t-shirt 💯
Thank you so much for reading and reflecting!! I appreciate you so much and it’s such a joy to have your words return ❤️🔥❤️🔥
That’s such an amazing capture of the essence of your poem!! Love it! And yes, there’s always a time when the Scorpio and 8H aspects of our chart start calling to us to look under those layers we haven’t looked at before. I always felt the fire element in your chart would be an important spark that moves the air and water placements into their next level expression. So much to explore here. And thank you my dear friend, I’m so happy to be back here sharing my responses to your beautiful words too <3 <3 <3
I would love to explore this with you deeper in another gorgeous cosmic poetry session!! ❤️❤️
Ahh so happy to hear that!! I would absolutely love to as well!! I can’t wait 😍✨✨
Fuuuuuck!!!!!! Yes! Yes yes yes. So fucking good. Ahhhhhhhh i’m literally Screaming out loud!!!!
Ahhh!! Yes!! I love this reaction haha. Literally smiling so big. Thanks for reading Faye 🔥🔥
Oohh, Jennae - that's wickedly fabulous! Exciting and unexpected. You demonstrate great versatility and imagination - daring and sexy. Well done!
Aww thank you Leon! That means a lot to me and I receive your feedback so warmly. It definitely pushed me outside my comfort zone and was so much fun to write and cathartic too. Thank you for being here 🔥
The feeling is mutual!
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I absolute love this. The sort of female rage we express with a mischievous grin. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Thank you sooo much Giovana!! Yes! Exactly! Sweet but sour with flames in her eyes 🔥
Jarring, emotional - freaking phenomenal!
Ahh thank you so much!! Thank you for reading! ❤️🔥
So empowering! Love the line about serving men. Wonderful poetry!
Thank you so much Yvonne!! I love that line too haha it’s pretty cheeky. 🔥
Wow the fire and power in every word, and also the sensuality beneath it all. I feel turned on and rebellious and like a lusty dark goddess all at the same time reading this 🔥
Ahh thank you so much for reading Aaliyah!! 🔥🔥I love all these words and feelings! So glad it felt that way to read it! So powerful to be a little bit of a dark lusty rebel every now and then haha Thank you for this comment ❤️🌹
whoa. powerful. reclamation.
Ahh thank you so much Elizabeth ❤️🔥 Thank you for being here!
Reclamation accomplished!
Yay! haha thank you for reading Paul!
flawless writing!! I love how vivid it is. your words dance around my mind, leaving me with butterflies🤍🤍
ahh thank you so much esther!! dancing words and butterflies! i love it! 🦋 thank you for reading!!
Wow just wow! I love this so much🥰 such a breathtaking companion to your softer angelic poem✨
It felt like fireworks reading it and I really cannot pick a favorite line! It’s so empowering and vivid🩸
gave me Jennifer’s body vibes too, and I used to love that movie❤️🔥
Thank you my dear Nadia!!! 🥰 Ahh that’s the best 🎆 I’m glad that it felt empowering ❤️🔥
I’ve never seen that movie but now I feel like I should!!
Oh wow this is POWERFUL and a bit terrifying. The best poetry elicits strong emotions. Very well done.
Thank you so much Mike!! This feedback is so appreciated!! I love that you found it terrifying 😈 hahaha. I promise I’m actually nice.
I'm quite sure that you are, haha. On the other hand, all desire is for a little mystery. If we knew exactly what we were chasing after, it wouldn't be worth getting. We like to be surprised. And we surprise ourselves. Herein lies the fun of poetry, and you dished out alluring shock in spades. Loved all the assonance and rhythm too. And your reading!
Absolutely, this is so true! Playing with poetry is so much fun. It was such a joyful and empowering experience to tell this story through the two poems.
Thank you so much!! I love experimenting with sound and rhythm. Thank you for being here and for your feedback!
Drop the mic 🎤🔥
Haha yes Marjorie!! That’s how I felt when I recorded it!! 🔥🔥 Thank you so much for reading ❤️