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jennae's avatar

Thank you so much for sharing!! 🦢

Always Already's avatar

Stunning and tactile. Senses alight with dancing skin tones. Another brilliant entry. Thank you.

jennae's avatar

Thank you so much!! You really captured the vision I was going for! Thank you for reading 🦢

Always Already's avatar

You’ve got a singular voice for this genre. Keep it up!

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Thank you so much for your continuing encouragement and support! ✨

Paul Wittenberger's avatar

Wonderfully soft and quiet dazzlement!

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Thank you Paul! This means so much coming from such a wonderful poet!! ✨✨

Kaitlyn Rightmyer's avatar

This is pure magic. 🥹✨

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Thank you so much dear Kaitlyn 🥹✨🩷

Cynthia's avatar

Soooo lovely 🫠💟 I find this so soft, gentle, honest, and soothing. So feminine.

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Ahhh thank you Cynthia 🙈 It’s always so beautiful to receive your reflections, it means the world to me 🦢✨

Cynthia's avatar

I love your writing so very much Jennae! 💞 so happy to be here with you! How lucky 🍀 am I?!?!

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Awww 🥹 the feeling is mutual Cynthia!! 💖

FJ molins's avatar

this is so beautiful!

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🥹 Thank you so so much Molins!! 🩷🦢

nadia g's avatar

This is so so gorgeous, from the heart firing words to the music, picture and aesthetics I love it all💗

It gave me the feeling of sitting in front of a fireplace on a bed of roses, drinking champagne and pondering passion and soft, loving lust❤️‍🔥

Amazing as always!

jennae's avatar

Thank you so much my dearest friend for your warm, dazzling words.

I love that it gave you that feeling 🥂 Your comments are always cherished!!

wildflower's avatar

„the champagne behind lashes

as fingers curl within“

My favorite. 💚 Absolutely beautiful poem.

jennae's avatar

Thank you so much for reading!! This makes me smile. It is also one of my favourite lines!!

rojeen rahman's avatar

so beautifully written

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Thank you so much Rojeen!! 🦢

Suyin Tan's avatar

I was enchanted from the first stanza -

"it’s the pomegranate that grows

from the florescence of a tree

the fireflies between your ribs

that long to fly free"

This poem is such a stunning tapestry of night time magic, romance, and wonder! I feel like I was right there, drinking in this gorgeous nocturnal landscape xxx

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I’m so so glad to hear this 🥲 Thank you so much for reading and living in my poem for a little while. Sending you lots of love and roses 🌹

Joscelyne Mei's avatar

This poem is a sweet, tender caress. The way you infuse sensual magic into our collarbones, ribs, the curl of a finger. So beautiful! 🎀🌙

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Joscelyne!! Thank you so much 🥹 I’m so glad it felt this way, your reflections always add so much beauty to my poems. 🎀🦢 Deeply grateful 🩷✨

Tom Shaw's avatar

The whole poem is really beautiful, and that last stanza really sealed it for me. Well done!

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Thank you so much for reading Tom! I deeply appreciate your feedback 🌹

petrichor's avatar

'between the thigh stoked fire', so beautiful

jennae's avatar

thank you so much!! 💖

JP Dávila's avatar

Beautiful stuff jennae

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Thank you so much JP!! Your support is really appreciated ☺️

Gala's avatar

beautiful as always!!

jennae's avatar

Thank you so much!! This means so much! Thank you for reading 💖🌈🌼

Elizabeth Grace Martinez's avatar

dreamy and effervescent

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Thank you so much Elizabeth!! Such lovely words to receive. So grateful for you being here 🥲🩷