This is absolutely gorgeous, so alive and full of feeling. I love how you’ve made desire feel like both a physical force and something almost mythical. The whole piece pulls me right into the moment. There’s such a beautiful tension between the ache and the reverence, especially with imagery like “hips coil like an ancient serpent.” It’s intimate without ever being too much, it feels raw, but also sacred, if that makes sense. You’ve captured something so universal and made it personal. I love it like always ❤️🔥❤️🔥
Ahhh these words of reflection are so gorgeous and heartfelt, thank you so much for shining your generous and thoughtful radiance upon this poem! The ache and the reverence, oh my gosh I love that!! Thank you so much for reading and supporting my dear friend! 🐚🤍
this is SOOO sexy in the most magical way that only you Jennae could write. I also really feel summer energy (summer season!) pulsating through every word. Bare skin, soft lips, sunkissed, hot and bothered... all of it! Maple Syrup stirred into cacao eyes - sultry and delicious 🌊 It's funny because it makes me think of winter, the season I'm currently in... well, close to it and sexy in winter is just communicated differently lol
Ahhh thank you so much Joscelyne 🙈 I’m so glad you enjoyed and felt the energy of this poem. I also love how you found this juxtaposition of sexy summer and sexy winter. You add so many layers to my poetry and I love how you read with this lens of seasons and rhythms. It’s so beautiful. Thank you so much for reading! I always receive your comments with so much love and gratitude!
ohhh this whole poem is so sensual and delicious! It has such a lovely balance between both the gentle and intense forces that shape desire. You've captured the feeling beautifully <3
Thank you so much for reading Mike!! Your feedback means so much, it’s such a pleasure to have you here. I love how we can build a friendship over geeking out about poetry and sonnets and imagery!
my eroscope (from Nairy) for sagittarius season was all about following my breadcrumbs of desire all day every day, its so precious how your poem celebrates that <3 so so beautiful!
i love how aligned this is for you right now!! yesss, our desire is so wise, may we all embrace our desire as a compass. thank you so much for reading!!
Oh my gosh, honey for the soul, I love that!! Thank you so much for always being here and for your beautiful words and soul. I can’t wait to share the next three parts 🐚🤍
Ahhh thank you so much Bry, made me smile! I love that you enjoyed the rhythm of this one and can’t wait to share the next three parts. Appreciate you!! 🐚🤍
This is absolutely gorgeous, so alive and full of feeling. I love how you’ve made desire feel like both a physical force and something almost mythical. The whole piece pulls me right into the moment. There’s such a beautiful tension between the ache and the reverence, especially with imagery like “hips coil like an ancient serpent.” It’s intimate without ever being too much, it feels raw, but also sacred, if that makes sense. You’ve captured something so universal and made it personal. I love it like always ❤️🔥❤️🔥
Ahhh these words of reflection are so gorgeous and heartfelt, thank you so much for shining your generous and thoughtful radiance upon this poem! The ache and the reverence, oh my gosh I love that!! Thank you so much for reading and supporting my dear friend! 🐚🤍
Oh yum yum yum, Jennae. An exquisite dance of hunger. You've let me wanting for the rest 👅
Yessss! Thank you so much for being here and reading. This feedback is so juicy, means so much coming from you. I can’t wait to share the rest!!
yayyyyy I can't wait either lover!!!
yayyyy!! this makes me smile ☺️☺️
Wow, this is beautifully written 💕
Thank you so much for reading Harley! Your words mean so much to me, so lovely to have you here!! 🐚🤍
this is SOOO sexy in the most magical way that only you Jennae could write. I also really feel summer energy (summer season!) pulsating through every word. Bare skin, soft lips, sunkissed, hot and bothered... all of it! Maple Syrup stirred into cacao eyes - sultry and delicious 🌊 It's funny because it makes me think of winter, the season I'm currently in... well, close to it and sexy in winter is just communicated differently lol
Ahhh thank you so much Joscelyne 🙈 I’m so glad you enjoyed and felt the energy of this poem. I also love how you found this juxtaposition of sexy summer and sexy winter. You add so many layers to my poetry and I love how you read with this lens of seasons and rhythms. It’s so beautiful. Thank you so much for reading! I always receive your comments with so much love and gratitude!
ohhh this whole poem is so sensual and delicious! It has such a lovely balance between both the gentle and intense forces that shape desire. You've captured the feeling beautifully <3
Thank you so much beautiful Zoe!! It’s such a pleasure to receive these words. Your support means so much. 🤍🤍
Gorgeous, jennae. What a flow of images, aromas, tastes, sensations…
Thank you so much for reading Mike!! Your feedback means so much, it’s such a pleasure to have you here. I love how we can build a friendship over geeking out about poetry and sonnets and imagery!
Yup. We definitely get each other. It’s a great feeling.
It really is!
my eroscope (from Nairy) for sagittarius season was all about following my breadcrumbs of desire all day every day, its so precious how your poem celebrates that <3 so so beautiful!
i love how aligned this is for you right now!! yesss, our desire is so wise, may we all embrace our desire as a compass. thank you so much for reading!!
This is so sweet and beautiful, honey for the soul. 🥰💛 „This atlas of sensation is urgent and strong
Hips coil like an ancient serpent that shivers.“ I’m so excited for the following. 🤩
Oh my gosh, honey for the soul, I love that!! Thank you so much for always being here and for your beautiful words and soul. I can’t wait to share the next three parts 🐚🤍
Honey for soul came instantly into my head while reading. 🌻💛😁
Aww that makes me so happy to hear!! ☺️🥲☺️🥲☺️
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I adore this piece 🥹 thank you for sharing this with us 🫶
Thank you so much 🥹🥹 It’s such a pleasure to share it, thank you for reading. 🐚🤍 So nice to have you here!!!
Incredibly beautiful! It felt like each line was bouncing to the next in such a lively way. Can’t wait for the rest!
Ahhh thank you so much Bry, made me smile! I love that you enjoyed the rhythm of this one and can’t wait to share the next three parts. Appreciate you!! 🐚🤍
Oh I loved this so much!!! I cannot wait to read all parts! 🤍🤍
Thank you so much for reading Hannah!! So looking forward to sharing the next three parts 🐚🤍
Stunning, felt so drawn to this one as soon as I saw the email 🤍🌊
Thank you so much for reading Aaliyah!! So glad that it resonated. May you have some time this week to follow a desire your body holds 🤍