Aww my beautiful friend, thank you for always reading and supporting me each and every week. Your poetic heart and friendship means the world to me and I honestly cherish you 🤍🎀
Likewise!! And now I've had a moment to listen to the audio, which took it to a whole new level. I appreciate the care you put into it with the piano music, and the way you stretch rhyming vowels just a little bit, really letting them sing with each other. Gorgeous!!
Dear Jennae, what a dazzlingly exquisite piece! I feel that in being touched with your words, I have turned into poetry myself <3 <3 I love all the different worlds you take us through with each section of the poem, how you take us with you high above to see the whole galaxy, and then to the heart of the earth, among dragonflies, flowers, our skin, and glittery drops of water to look up at the world from below. It's just stunning!!
Dear Suyin, thank you so much for this beautiful comment. It makes my heart sing to hear that reading this made you feel like you turned into poetry yourself! Thank you for reading and reflecting my work in such a lovely way. I love that you felt the journey woven through this poem. I appreciate you so deeply!! 🩷🩰✨
Yes, I have been touched by a poet before. When I first read the sonnets of Shakespeare. That was the reason I got into them and learned how to write them and have a great amount of them written. Good poem and good read.
Aww thank you so much Elizabeth!! Such lovely feedback, I love that we both have been writing about dragonflies. Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🩰✨🕸️
planets traced around your skin” - when I read this part it reminded me of one of my favorite songs by this band, Modest Mouse, called Fire It Up. These lyrics to this day are always what pull me in:
Oh we ate all of the oranges
Off the navels of our lovers
Grabbed a book and read the cover
And this question, have you heard the poet whisper, can i be your moon? (Reading it and listening to it have made me tear up, my love for the moon knows no bounds) ✨😭🌘🐇
Ooh I will have to listen to that song!! I love that lyric ☺️ Awwww, I’m so glad you connected with it, I also love moon just like you. Thank you so much for reading Joscelyne!! Your comments are always so thoughtful and insightful. 🩰✨🩷
Thank you so much for your feedback on the music as well! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Your poetry set to music would be divine 😍 If you need any help learning how to mix them together or where to get royalty free music I’d be happy to help. I’m not a pro but I’m learning more and more as I go along 🥰
That’s so generous of you Jennae. I’d love to know where to access the music and what apps/programs you use to mix together. I wouldn’t have a clue! Xxxx
Thank you so much for reading Margaret!! I’m so glad that part touched you! I love hearing about each reader’s favourite lines! Thank you so much for sharing and for being here 🩰✨🌸💗
Your poetry is a balm for the heart. Just what I need today. Thank you so much for your generosity in sharing this beautiful talent and creativity. You're a true healer. ☺
Aww Yvonne, your words are always so sweet and make me smile! I’m glad that this poem could be a heart balm for you today, sending you so much love! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment 🩰✨
What a dreamy and tender hug of a piece 🤍 it made me feel so vividly the feeling of being in love and that touch that transcends the physical!
I can see your beauty here, how your love is a product of all the light within you that shines upon the ones you touch with love✨
With every poem you outdo yourself, can’t wait for more!
Aww my beautiful friend, thank you for always reading and supporting me each and every week. Your poetic heart and friendship means the world to me and I honestly cherish you 🤍🎀
This comment is so lovely 🥹
Thank you so much!! 🩰✨
I have, and now I have again. Amazing.
It’s such a joy to have you here Mike! Seeing your comments always makes me smile. Thank you so much for reading 🩰✨
Likewise!! And now I've had a moment to listen to the audio, which took it to a whole new level. I appreciate the care you put into it with the piano music, and the way you stretch rhyming vowels just a little bit, really letting them sing with each other. Gorgeous!!
It reminds me a bit of this piece of mine, which you may enjoy if you have time: https://mikesperiosu.substack.com/p/hey-you
Thank you so much for this feedback on the audio. You always have such generous and rich words to share and I appreciate it so much.
I will definitely have a look at this poem, so excited to read it! ✨
Dear Jennae, what a dazzlingly exquisite piece! I feel that in being touched with your words, I have turned into poetry myself <3 <3 I love all the different worlds you take us through with each section of the poem, how you take us with you high above to see the whole galaxy, and then to the heart of the earth, among dragonflies, flowers, our skin, and glittery drops of water to look up at the world from below. It's just stunning!!
Dear Suyin, thank you so much for this beautiful comment. It makes my heart sing to hear that reading this made you feel like you turned into poetry yourself! Thank you for reading and reflecting my work in such a lovely way. I love that you felt the journey woven through this poem. I appreciate you so deeply!! 🩷🩰✨
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this filled my soullll and made it singgg
Ahh thank you so much Mohika!! That warms my heart to hear. Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment 🩰✨
Yes, I have been touched by a poet before. When I first read the sonnets of Shakespeare. That was the reason I got into them and learned how to write them and have a great amount of them written. Good poem and good read.
That is such a lovely story about your experience with sonnets, how beautiful. Thank you so much for reading and commenting Luis!! ✨
This is an amazing poem🥺 you’re such a good writer
Aww thank you so much Gala! That means so much to me. Thank you for reading!! 🩰✨
I love the gossamer delicacy of these lines. I also wrote about a dragonfly recently
Aww thank you so much Elizabeth!! Such lovely feedback, I love that we both have been writing about dragonflies. Thank you so much for reading and commenting 🩰✨🕸️
Jennae! Your voice is just the sweetest complement for this divine poetry.
Thank you so much Florencia!! That is so sweet of you to say. Thank you for reading, so grateful to have you here 🩰✨
Two things, but there’s probably more:
“have you felt your navel
become the sun
planets traced around your skin” - when I read this part it reminded me of one of my favorite songs by this band, Modest Mouse, called Fire It Up. These lyrics to this day are always what pull me in:
Oh we ate all of the oranges
Off the navels of our lovers
Grabbed a book and read the cover
And this question, have you heard the poet whisper, can i be your moon? (Reading it and listening to it have made me tear up, my love for the moon knows no bounds) ✨😭🌘🐇
Ooh I will have to listen to that song!! I love that lyric ☺️ Awwww, I’m so glad you connected with it, I also love moon just like you. Thank you so much for reading Joscelyne!! Your comments are always so thoughtful and insightful. 🩰✨🩷
This is just sublime and ethereal <3
Thank you so much my sweet friend 🩰✨ Always such a pleasure and joy to have your venusian gaze dance over my poems 🩷
What a glorious poem Jennae ♥️ So delicate and dreamy and sensual. Loved it!
Oh thank you so much Amanda 🩰✨I love these words you have used to describe the poem, so grateful for you taking the time to read and comment! 🌸💗☁️
It was a beautiful read!
Thank you 🙈💗
PS I love the background music! 🙌🏻I’ve tried this on instagram posts but it’s so lovely here as well. I’m inspired! X
Thank you so much for your feedback on the music as well! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Your poetry set to music would be divine 😍 If you need any help learning how to mix them together or where to get royalty free music I’d be happy to help. I’m not a pro but I’m learning more and more as I go along 🥰
That’s so generous of you Jennae. I’d love to know where to access the music and what apps/programs you use to mix together. I wouldn’t have a clue! Xxxx
I’ll send you a DM on insta 🥰🥰
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One of my favorite parts:
"have you felt your navel
become the sun
planets traced around your skin
counted one by one
embraced as your own little galaxy?"
Thank you so much for reading Margaret!! I’m so glad that part touched you! I love hearing about each reader’s favourite lines! Thank you so much for sharing and for being here 🩰✨🌸💗
This is stunning, Jennae! The imagery is just phenomenal 🌸
Thank you so much Carolyn!! That means so much to me! So grateful to have you here, thank you for reading 🌸🌸
So vivid and beautiful
Thank you so much Robert! 🩰✨
Your poetry is a balm for the heart. Just what I need today. Thank you so much for your generosity in sharing this beautiful talent and creativity. You're a true healer. ☺
Aww Yvonne, your words are always so sweet and make me smile! I’m glad that this poem could be a heart balm for you today, sending you so much love! Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment 🩰✨
Yes I am being touched right now. So lovely 🩵
Aww this is so lovely to hear!! Thank you so much for reading Grace and taking the time to leave a comment. I appreciate you being here 🩰✨